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Sara kept staring, her heart skipped a beat, her face turned bright red. Because there he was, sitting, surrounded by his popular friends who were all fooling around. But he was different. He was cool, he was mature.
Sara kept staring, Abdullah looked at the direction and saw Saeed sitting there. Abdullah was disappointed, but he tried to hide it.
"You're drooling you know." He tried to joke.
Sara snapped out of it, and pulled herself together, she took a deep breath and walked in, when all of a sudden
.. Uh oh..
Sara tripped and fell flat on her face right in front of Saeed and his friends. Saeed's friends laughed like the airheads they were, but Saeed got up and ran to Sara, who was lying dead on the floor. Abdullah noticed that Saeed was heading toward Sara, anger filled within him, so he rushed over to helped Sara before Saeed could.
"Hey, back off!" Abdullah yelled at Saeed.
"Dude, chill.." Said Saeed, "I just wanted to help her up." He continued.
Sara turned her body with her hands covering her face,
"Sara?" they both said.
She removed her hands from her face when suddenly Saeed jokes,
"Peek-a-Boo"
Sara blushed and covered her face with her hands.
"Haha cutie" Saeed laughed the most adorable laugh Sara has ever heard.
"Ah! That laugh! I must be dreaming!!" Sara thought to herself.
They both helped her up, each grabbing one of her hands. When Sara was finally up, she realized she was still holding Saeed's hand.
"Mm, you can let go now" Saeed joked.
Sara blushed, "Oh, mm, sorry, I didn't R-realize.."
How embarassing.
"Haha, that's fine, I didn't wanna let go either." Said Saeed.
Abdullah was being torn apart by jealousy.
Sara giggled and blushed. "Erm, come on 3bood let's go sit down." Said Sara.
"Oh so you're the famous '3bood'?" Asked Saeed, raising one eyebrow.
"Huh?" Abdullah and Sara said simultaneously.
"Last time we spoke, you yelled 3bood and ran away, remember?" Saeed reminded her.
"Ohhhhhh that." Sara remembered.
"You screamed my name?" Abdullah asked Sara, smiling.
"Can you continue this conversation some other time please? Come on Sara.." Said Saeed, as he took her by the hand. "Sit next to me, way over THERE." He continued.
Abdullah and all of Saeed's friends just stared at them, wide-eyed.
Sara and Saeed took a seat at the back of the class, where no one could see them. Abdullah sat at the front, crushed, and furious, until suddenly he gets hit on the head with a spit ball. He turned around to see who it was, but all he heard was laughter. He turned back once more, and caught Saeed in the act.
Apparently, Sara was looking for something in her backpack, when Saeed decided to make his move. Then, Saeed threw one last paper, that said
"Jealous much? Mind your own business."
Abdullah gave up, turned around, and got out his Blackberry from his pocket. He noticed that the red light was blinking, and someone was talking to him on the Blackberry Messenger. It was Sara.
Sara: I'm sorry, I just couldn't say no.
Abdullah: Lol, that's fine I can tell your head over heals for him, have fun.
Sara: Aih mb chee! I just couldn't be rude! I'm sorry.
Abdullah: Talk to you later.
"So what are YOU in for?" Sara joked, pretending to be prisinors.
"I don't know. Aparently, fighting will lead to detention." Said Saeed, sarchastically.
"Oh tell me about it!" And they just laughed the day away.
Meanwhile, time passed by slowly for Abdullah, he turned his head once more, and noticed that Sara was having a good time. Saeed gave Abdullah another look, and winked. Abdullah felt as though detention was lasting forever.
As soon as the bell rang, and detention was over, Abdullah ran out, and sat on the staircase. He sat there for about 10 minutes, just thinking, when all of a sudden, he gets hit on the head with a paper again. Abdullah was frustrated, anger was printed on his face, he grabbed the paper, expecting it to be another threat from Saeed, but to his surprise, It said
"I'm sorry.
Love, Sara."
Abdullah's features went from rage to joy in a heartbeat, then sara came down the stair case, and sat down beside him, gave him a hug and said,
"Forgive me?".
Abdullah looked stared into her beautiful eyes for a few seconds then finally said, "Ofcourse I do."
Sara hugged him harder, then let go, and gave him a kiss on the cheek. Then awkward silence took over.
"What was that for?" Abdullah said jokingly, pleased.
"Umm.. I'm not sure!" Sara had no idea why she did that. "I'm sorry oh my god I wasn't thinking."
She started apologizing.
Abdullah laughed and said "Saroh yal sbaleh tst7een mni? its nothing to be ashamed of, we've been best friends since forever." Abdullah reassured her.
All of a sudden, Sara's blackberry starts vibrating. She had received a Blackberry Messenger (BBM) notification. It was Saeed.
Saeed: Hey hun, meet me at the mall at 5?
"Hun?!" Sara accidentally blurted out. She was angry at first, then she actually blushed. Abdullah was angry and demanded to know what had just happened. Sara gave up and showed him the conversation.
"What is that guy's problem?!" Abdullah said, well actually screamed.
"Calm down 3abood.." Sara said, worried.
"How can I calm down when this GUY is flirting with my BEST FRIEND, no my SISTER." He kept yelling.
"How can I say no to him?" Sara asked.
"Don't! I will!" Abdullah grabbed Sara's blackberry.
Sara felt furious, she pulled her BB back and yelled "BACK OFF."
Abdullah was stunned, he went quiet for a few seconds then said,
"You like him don't you?"
Sara looked down, then looked Abdullah in the eyes and said
"Stay out of my love life."
Abdullah's heart shattered into a million pieces,
"She'll never know I wanna be part of her love life.." Abdullah thought to himself.
"FINE. Whatever." Abdullah shouted.
Sara wanted to piss him off, so she typed in
"Is it a date ;)?",
and showed it to Abdullah. Abdullah got up and walked away.
"A date it is!" Replied Saeed.
Sara kept typing, completely forgetting Abdullah, not even noticing that he had got up and walked away. As Abdullah walked the halls, the lights closed, every step until he disappeared into the darkness.
*Ring* Home time bell rang.
"3abood..?" Sara whispered to herself, as she searched the dark halls, with no sign of Abdullah.
Sara kept staring, Abdullah looked at the direction and saw Saeed sitting there. Abdullah was disappointed, but he tried to hide it.
"You're drooling you know." He tried to joke.
Sara snapped out of it, and pulled herself together, she took a deep breath and walked in, when all of a sudden
.. Uh oh..
Sara tripped and fell flat on her face right in front of Saeed and his friends. Saeed's friends laughed like the airheads they were, but Saeed got up and ran to Sara, who was lying dead on the floor. Abdullah noticed that Saeed was heading toward Sara, anger filled within him, so he rushed over to helped Sara before Saeed could.
"Hey, back off!" Abdullah yelled at Saeed.
"Dude, chill.." Said Saeed, "I just wanted to help her up." He continued.
Sara turned her body with her hands covering her face,
"Sara?" they both said.
She removed her hands from her face when suddenly Saeed jokes,
"Peek-a-Boo"
Sara blushed and covered her face with her hands.
"Haha cutie" Saeed laughed the most adorable laugh Sara has ever heard.
"Ah! That laugh! I must be dreaming!!" Sara thought to herself.
They both helped her up, each grabbing one of her hands. When Sara was finally up, she realized she was still holding Saeed's hand.
"Mm, you can let go now" Saeed joked.
Sara blushed, "Oh, mm, sorry, I didn't R-realize.."
How embarassing.
"Haha, that's fine, I didn't wanna let go either." Said Saeed.
Abdullah was being torn apart by jealousy.
Sara giggled and blushed. "Erm, come on 3bood let's go sit down." Said Sara.
"Oh so you're the famous '3bood'?" Asked Saeed, raising one eyebrow.
"Huh?" Abdullah and Sara said simultaneously.
"Last time we spoke, you yelled 3bood and ran away, remember?" Saeed reminded her.
"Ohhhhhh that." Sara remembered.
"You screamed my name?" Abdullah asked Sara, smiling.
"Can you continue this conversation some other time please? Come on Sara.." Said Saeed, as he took her by the hand. "Sit next to me, way over THERE." He continued.
Abdullah and all of Saeed's friends just stared at them, wide-eyed.
Sara and Saeed took a seat at the back of the class, where no one could see them. Abdullah sat at the front, crushed, and furious, until suddenly he gets hit on the head with a spit ball. He turned around to see who it was, but all he heard was laughter. He turned back once more, and caught Saeed in the act.
Apparently, Sara was looking for something in her backpack, when Saeed decided to make his move. Then, Saeed threw one last paper, that said
"Jealous much? Mind your own business."
Abdullah gave up, turned around, and got out his Blackberry from his pocket. He noticed that the red light was blinking, and someone was talking to him on the Blackberry Messenger. It was Sara.
Sara: I'm sorry, I just couldn't say no.
Abdullah: Lol, that's fine I can tell your head over heals for him, have fun.
Sara: Aih mb chee! I just couldn't be rude! I'm sorry.
Abdullah: Talk to you later.
"So what are YOU in for?" Sara joked, pretending to be prisinors.
"I don't know. Aparently, fighting will lead to detention." Said Saeed, sarchastically.
"Oh tell me about it!" And they just laughed the day away.
Meanwhile, time passed by slowly for Abdullah, he turned his head once more, and noticed that Sara was having a good time. Saeed gave Abdullah another look, and winked. Abdullah felt as though detention was lasting forever.
As soon as the bell rang, and detention was over, Abdullah ran out, and sat on the staircase. He sat there for about 10 minutes, just thinking, when all of a sudden, he gets hit on the head with a paper again. Abdullah was frustrated, anger was printed on his face, he grabbed the paper, expecting it to be another threat from Saeed, but to his surprise, It said
"I'm sorry.
Love, Sara."
Abdullah's features went from rage to joy in a heartbeat, then sara came down the stair case, and sat down beside him, gave him a hug and said,
"Forgive me?".
Abdullah looked stared into her beautiful eyes for a few seconds then finally said, "Ofcourse I do."
Sara hugged him harder, then let go, and gave him a kiss on the cheek. Then awkward silence took over.
"What was that for?" Abdullah said jokingly, pleased.
"Umm.. I'm not sure!" Sara had no idea why she did that. "I'm sorry oh my god I wasn't thinking."
She started apologizing.
Abdullah laughed and said "Saroh yal sbaleh tst7een mni? its nothing to be ashamed of, we've been best friends since forever." Abdullah reassured her.
All of a sudden, Sara's blackberry starts vibrating. She had received a Blackberry Messenger (BBM) notification. It was Saeed.
Saeed: Hey hun, meet me at the mall at 5?
"Hun?!" Sara accidentally blurted out. She was angry at first, then she actually blushed. Abdullah was angry and demanded to know what had just happened. Sara gave up and showed him the conversation.
"What is that guy's problem?!" Abdullah said, well actually screamed.
"Calm down 3abood.." Sara said, worried.
"How can I calm down when this GUY is flirting with my BEST FRIEND, no my SISTER." He kept yelling.
"How can I say no to him?" Sara asked.
"Don't! I will!" Abdullah grabbed Sara's blackberry.
Sara felt furious, she pulled her BB back and yelled "BACK OFF."
Abdullah was stunned, he went quiet for a few seconds then said,
"You like him don't you?"
Sara looked down, then looked Abdullah in the eyes and said
"Stay out of my love life."
Abdullah's heart shattered into a million pieces,
"She'll never know I wanna be part of her love life.." Abdullah thought to himself.
"FINE. Whatever." Abdullah shouted.
Sara wanted to piss him off, so she typed in
"Is it a date ;)?",
and showed it to Abdullah. Abdullah got up and walked away.
"A date it is!" Replied Saeed.
Sara kept typing, completely forgetting Abdullah, not even noticing that he had got up and walked away. As Abdullah walked the halls, the lights closed, every step until he disappeared into the darkness.
*Ring* Home time bell rang.
"3abood..?" Sara whispered to herself, as she searched the dark halls, with no sign of Abdullah.
awih 7araaaaaaaaaaaaam :'(
ReplyDeleteb9f3ha :P
'3m'6ny 3bOd *Hugs* :PP !
waiting for the next part :D
*Muts ;*
Muts ! - yah 7ram ! >.< hehe thnx for passing by :***
ReplyDeleteA~
awaaaaaaaaih
ReplyDelete7araaam :S i feel sorry for him
i hate saeed !
niice post
loooove ur writing <3
SpringOfTruth- we all hate him too :P, yay glad you loved it :*
ReplyDeletethnx for passing by <3
A~
Your doing a very good job =).. Keep at it!
ReplyDeleteThank you <3 :*!
ReplyDeleteH~
I completely ADORE it!! <3
ReplyDeleteGood job :D
Saeed dude is pissing off :O .. and so is Sara :P
ReplyDeleteAnyway, when will the story continue ? :D i cant wait to hear more ... =)
aaaww.. i feel so bad for 3abood! hahaa i loved how u added "sarooh yal sbaleh tst7een mni??"
ReplyDeletekeep this up, its great :D
Sooo Kyooot Wen She Kissed Him W mdre Shu
ReplyDeleteWaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayed y'3m'6 3boood 7ubi :P
A7s The Hottie will turn out to be an ASS
SHE IS SO MEAN!
ReplyDeletehey, I'm the one who wrote the agonizingly - long revier last chapter.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't resist. Looks like you'll be seeing a lot of me.
I really, REALLY didn't want to criticize you, AGAIN. But my inner spelling bee is screaming!
Again, if it's a diary, how can we ( and Sara ) know what Abdulla is thinking, hmm??
Also, I absolutley abhor Saeed. ;)
review*.
ReplyDeleteLoL, and here was I, commenting on some spelling mistakes.
It was a type-o.
Uh, I forgot to point out exactly WHY my inner spelling bee was screaming.
ReplyDeleteSarcastically is how you spell it.
7araam 3abdullaah </3
ReplyDeleteanaa aba 7d chee :P !